I wrote it in Jan 2007 .....during a mood swing which resulted in these flow of thoughts....
With each passing day we discover our inner-self even better.
Our Soul is the only eternal companion in this journey called "LIFE".
Solitude of my Soul
Standing in a busy street,feeling alone,
I see the world,still as a stone.
People passing by,behaving as strangers,
Emotions and feelings are endangered!
Screaming to the world,I am here,
I scream till my voice becomes unclear.
Going away,people unable to hear,
Leaving me alone,all near and dear!
Crying for help,pleading with tears,
Engrossed in their lives,no one cares.
No time to stand,No time to gaze,
This alien attitude leaves me in a daze!
I remain silent and stop complaining,
people think happiness i am containing.
people are deaf,people are dumb,
people are blind,and have blocked their mind!
Left with my soul,to understand my stress,
Sure,It will take me away from Life's mess.
Leave me alone,Leave me alone,
Let me embrace the solitude of my soul!
--Syed Imtiaz
5 comments:
man you are getting better and better.though i'm not a critic but i find this one better than the previous ones
this not my work like the 'cutie-hotie' thing.
" Thus let me live unseen,unknown
Thus unlamented let me die;
steal from the world & not a stone
tell where I lie;"
from Solitude
ALEXANDER POPE
dude ...truely a master piece....daaa...i am too small n incapble ..to comment ...man ..i sware ..so very original ..i loooooooooooooooooveedd it daa ul go a long way u rock ....l
HEY IMTIYAZ UR REALY GREAT POET
HEY IMTIYAZ UR REALY GREAT POET
You write really well man. Awesome poem. Very moody.
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