I would like to share one of my poems titled 'The Invisible Mask'.
I have always felt that we are scared to show our real self to others.....we disclose only a part of our idenity to different people and always want to be within the limit of goodness. Somehow, we all try to be diplomatic in whatever we do.
I agree, we ought to be diplomatic sometimes....but is it agreeable at the cost of our true nature??
We just try to hide behind a mask....a mask which is only visible to us.....our friends dont even have a faint idea of it....For them the mask is Invisible!
*The Invisible Mask*
The different masks,today we wear,
our true self it is we declare.
To each person,we have a mask so unique,

its all like a game-hide and seek.
Our thoughts have always been hidden,
Is speaking our hearts forbidden??
Always trying to please and impress everyone,
A life so insecure has begun.
Living a life,fake and superficial,
Its no way going to be beneficial.
Its like a drama,its like a play,
Different masks for a different day.
When one mask is removed,
another mask is approved.
Constantly changing and hiding behind a veil,
Our worthy identity we always conceal.
The fear of rejection has crept in our mind,
people's judgement has made us blind.
Pretending has become a second nature,
and our real self is always in capture.
Let us throw away our masks,
I know, this may be a difficult task.
But....we have to show what we are,
and respect people for who they are!
Remember....I am what I am!!
for what people think....i care a damn!!
--Syed Imtiaz
I would be glad to recieve comments.....Do you wear an Invisible Mask??
14 comments:
Awesome poem Imtu...
Very well thought and very well put down in words...
The last lines are nice..
"Remember....I am what I am!!
for what people think....i care a damn!"
Way to go Imtu....
hey buddie...great start to ur blog."The Invisible Mask" captures the human tendency to switch between different mask's and also it forces to take a look at our own conscience.bravo..keep up the gud work...Cheers.
Well imti ....true indeed was very well written ...basically deals with peoples identity n persona..but as i said b fore...too it is indeed very important to posses a mask ..even if it is at the cost of our own identity?? Strange but true...certainly ..Life is all abt sacrifices n giving n taking but u Cant behave as u are to diff people Even u dislike things which may not bother u but it does for others ..A Mask is a Must in life b coz it all abt meeting diff people ..Imitaz...u ve certainly ..potrayed some thin which no body had thought abt in particular ..But do it subconsiously....Rock ..on buddy
i really envy u ,excellent dude
i appreciate ur poem imtu...i really wonder how u write that kind of poems at this age...he is so matured as his brother...the 'invisibe mask' made me to think a lot....wht am i dng? and for wht? good imtu...
hmmmm....well everyone wears one...no one is a gandhi...no one can be..there will never be a world without immorality and lies.The point is not to deliberate about the "invisible mask" but to live and learn ways to unmask..peace
well...if u think of those who do not wear a mask...yes at times we all do..but most of the times....there are those who do not...for to them..it is more unreal..and more diffocult to put on these masks...liked the line where u said different mask for a different day....no wonder people leave you baffled....
i am amazed....i never knew u can write shoo good......felt like unleashing thoughts that are deep inside one's heart......gr8 work and a gr8 start....
well....life is a big story....and at some point you really need to wear a mask.....INVISIBLE MASK....human life has to pass through a lot of phases....and everyones attitude does change as time moves on.....
let me tell you....YOU ALSO WORE AN INVISIBLE MASK WHILE WRITING THIS POEM....."Always trying to please and impress everyone,
A life so insecure has begun."......this seems to me that u were always concerned regarding the feedbacks of this poem.....so...AN INVISIBLE MASK.
i think i had a poem like this in my school-book by Ogden Nash...
Wordsworth beware Imtiaz is here!!
Ooo sweetie what a cutie
you are a hotie.
howz ma poem?.LOLZ ROLFZ
Man welcome to cyberspace.
happy blogging.
awesome poem!!
I know it is true....everyone wears it. coz its essential to survive in the society...... A mask for the ugly bones...!!!
kya poetry hai
lajawab
life is nothing but a stage...and v r nothing but actors trying to play our respective roles...its all a play where there r so many different characters and so many different natures to each character....so as much as v hate hiding behind invisible masks..v r forced to do so most of the time..!!!
bro u rock ur just awsome man
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